More Audience Feedback

Stephen Mcdermot- " Looking tidy rhyce, it does look professional but spice it up on the context page by adding some colours, bolding and highlightin etc, maybe throw another image on the the double page spread  just to spread the writing out more its a lot to take in at once. Last thing it looks like will is coming out as gay with the main headline title(nothing wrong if he is like). But overall i would say that you magazine is fairly well presented and looks professional.

Will Lawton- " I like the location of the image as it gives you a good insight to what the style of the magazine is, it looks well layed out and easy to read, you just need to do more on your content page.

Jen Smyth- " Your cover lines on your front cover need to be smaller because everything is drawing you in at the minute rather than all of them! need to start adding text onto your double page spread  also you need to add some page numbers? also same with your contents i think that the text needs to be smaller and you need to add social platforms.

Audience Feedback

Kirstie Levell- " Firstly is your music magazine aimed at the gender males? I like how you have kept a consistent theme throughout in order to make the magazine come across as professional. maybe underline or change the colour of the important information on the front so that the reader reads those parts first? Your contents page needs to include icons for example, the twitter and facebook ones.you also need more articles involved as thats what the contents page is about. its good that youve added page numbers so that the audience know exactly where to turn to. also in relation to the articles, you need more because every rock music magazine i have had hold of is quite thick so you just need more.

Karl Graham- " The location of where you have took your shot is great, the model looks like he is giving a badboy look, but your text could do with some effect.

Michael Duffy- " Not many bright colours have been used, white is  plain and boring, and the front cover could have been straight and not on an angle. But overall the text is layed out out well making it look professional.

latest draft of my content page

I have added a Facebook and twitter icon in the bottom corner, i just need to take some new images to out on to it.

Changes to my front cover

This is my latest draft of my front cover, as you can see i have made a few changes, I have replaced my text into an area where the audience is able to see it properly, i have changed the font style so it is easier to read and a lot more clearer. i have changed the main story font colour so that it is more eye catching to the reader, i also have added a banner across the bottom.