Stephen Mcdermot- " Looking tidy rhyce, it does look professional but spice it up on the context page by adding some colours, bolding and highlightin etc, maybe throw another image on the the double page spread just to spread the writing out more its a lot to take in at once. Last thing it looks like will is coming out as gay with the main headline title(nothing wrong if he is like). But overall i would say that you magazine is fairly well presented and looks professional.
Will Lawton- " I like the location of the image as it gives you a good insight to what the style of the magazine is, it looks well layed out and easy to read, you just need to do more on your content page.
Jen Smyth- " Your cover lines on your front cover need to be smaller because everything is drawing you in at the minute rather than all of them! need to start adding text onto your double page spread also you need to add some page numbers? also same with your contents i think that the text needs to be smaller and you need to add social platforms.
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