Kirstie Levell- " Firstly is your music magazine aimed at the gender males? I like how you have kept a consistent theme throughout in order to make the magazine come across as professional. maybe underline or change the colour of the important information on the front so that the reader reads those parts first? Your contents page needs to include icons for example, the twitter and facebook ones.you also need more articles involved as thats what the contents page is about. its good that youve added page numbers so that the audience know exactly where to turn to. also in relation to the articles, you need more because every rock music magazine i have had hold of is quite thick so you just need more.
Karl Graham- " The location of where you have took your shot is great, the model looks like he is giving a badboy look, but your text could do with some effect.
Michael Duffy- " Not many bright colours have been used, white is plain and boring, and the front cover could have been straight and not on an angle. But overall the text is layed out out well making it look professional.
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